Teacher feedback

Your blog is looking good; you’re achieving a good level of reflectiveness and documenting your process. Your posts could perhaps be slightly more varied in terms of using the blog technology but this is a minor criticism in the grand scheme of the project. If you’re after full marks though…?!

Read through the attached checklist to make sure you have everything you should have on your blog and can you add to your recent post about filming on the 22^nd – photos maybe? Also do you have any digipak drafts that you could post to show your progress with that? Make sure you are documenting carefully what your individual contributions are to the production side of things too.

Please post this email on your blog.

Regards,

Leanne

Teacher feedback

            

I will reflect on this feedback by regularly updating and posting new blogs about the project but also remember to comment/annotate each of them. 

Pitch feedback and reflection

Above are feedback sheets about our pitch from fellow classmates in our class and our teacher. Positives given were our artist, record label and our target audience is suitable. Things to improve on were the narrative/music video because it came across as unclear and as a group we intend to review everything more thoroughly.

Pitch video

Feedback

After receiving the feedback in class, I will change my design format for my blog to make it user friendly and represent our group's artist. I'll begin to look at various ways for me to present my work on my blog in order to keep the viewer's interest. For example, using Slideshare, Prezi, etc.